Thesis Statements/Topic Sentences

Thesis Statements

Odysseus' biggest flaw is his pride because it causes him to be boastful, arrogant, and being rash.

Odysseus' biggest flaw is his pride, it often causes him trouble and gets him into tight situation because it affects his actions towards others.

Topic Sentence

1. People often want to take credit for the things they've done, while this isn't always bad it also can involve being to prideful and bragging about their accomplishments.
2. Pride is known as the most deadly sin because it can lead to other things, such as being arrogant.
3. Odysseus is a natural born leader, but on occasion his belief in his own cleverness makes him act without thinking about the consquences of his actions.